milos31
Tender vittles  Posts: 2 Registered: 9/27/2007 Offline
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9/27/2007 at 13:52  |
Hi there I have just started my first site :
http://funnytogo.com
please review it and post some comments about it.
I will try to put some more fresh content on my pages.
Thanks for your time
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JohnLenin
Putting the semen in amusement   SSHOLEPosts: 1085 Registered: 7/8/2005 Offline
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9/27/2007 at 21:06 |
There are already way too many sites like this, so you're basically just pissing into an ocean of piss. Except it's more like you're shitting, because this is shit.
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azron123
I can break you with my mind. Watch, I'll do it.  SSHOLEPosts: 1505 Registered: 3/6/2003 Offline
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9/28/2007 at 02:09 |
Looks pretty good.
They all look pretty good.
In fact they all look fucking identical with the same fucking stuff.
Try this
Lock yourself in a dimly lit room with a case of twinkies, a bunch of fritos and cheese doodles and a couple cases of mountain dew. Bring along a pen and a legal pad. After a week or so if you're lucky you'll get an idea.
Good. Write it down. Leave the room. Take a shower. Start a new web site based on the idea.
Come back and we'll give you a hand with it.
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spod
SIR BABYHEAD  Posts: 65 Registered: 8/13/2006 Offline
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9/28/2007 at 10:03 |
your site looks good on the surface but lacks substance...there is nothing there that makes me want to go back for more.
apart from that it "looks good" |
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Steel
If you want to keep your tongue, don't lick me in the Winter!  SSHOLEPosts: 509 Registered: 10/14/2004 Offline
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9/28/2007 at 12:35 |
^ Really? I don't even think it looks good. Hey I'm not saying people shouldn't try to start up thier own shit, but come on.
milos, you surf the Interweb don'cha? You know what good looking sites look like right? You know that yours isn't one of them, but hey. It's certainly a step in the right direction to ask for feedback...
If only there were rules that every new website building guy had to follow just prior to throwing their site in here...
Step 1) Read 10 other threads in the "Website Reviews" Forum
Step 2) Take a look at the sites people asked LS to review, read the reviews
Step 3) Relook at your own site and think to self, "Hey? Do any of the earlier suggestions apply to me?"
Step 4) If you answer yes to step 3, fix your site and repeat steps 2 and 3.
Step 5) Once all your shit is prettied all up... Come back... Hey we are all about looking at brand new sites...
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pangels
Tender vittles  Posts: 4 Registered: 9/30/2007 Offline
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9/30/2007 at 11:16 |
I think the site is ok, you just have to find a way to market it to your users or find a way to get user, then they will tell you what they need more than we can tell you. For now, I think you can do it.
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JohnLenin
Putting the semen in amusement SSHOLEPosts: 1085 Registered: 7/8/2005 Offline
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9/30/2007 at 17:20 |
pangels: I think the site is ok, you just have to find a way to market it to your users or find a way to get user, then they will tell you what they need more than we can tell you. For now, I think you can do it.
you make me sick
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milos31
Tender vittles Posts: 2 Registered: 9/27/2007 Offline
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9/30/2007 at 20:05  |
For all hard comments like my content is common here is something
different I wold like to add in my pages
This is just a trail run of section called history stories and articles so some comments about this projects are welcome.Poor interest and response in this field will force me to change this section....to switch in economics,space,industry,sports of whatever.
http://funnytogo.com/stories/rommelfuneral.htm
Once more thanks for your time
If someone can translate this into English so I can put text using sony vegas...
On 2007-09-30 at 15:56:48, milos31 craps baby wotak monkeypigeon |
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r0b0c0p
Tender vittles  Posts: 38 Registered: 10/5/2007 Offline
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10/5/2007 at 02:16 |
0/5
Linkswarm was not under your "friends" list. |
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dent
Slipping it into the wrong hole any chance I get  SSHOLEPosts: 877 Registered: 10/20/2004 Offline
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10/5/2007 at 06:05 |
The only redeeming quality about your website is that you'll soon realize how horrible it is and delete it. If you put forth as much effort in your day to day life as you do in your internet life, remember to cut vertically.
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JohnLenin
Putting the semen in amusement SSHOLEPosts: 1085 Registered: 7/8/2005 Offline
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10/5/2007 at 07:57 |
PROTIP: Black Belts make everything you do better.
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