urkeee
Tender vittles  Posts: 2 Registered: 9/19/2007 Offline
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9/19/2007 at 11:17  |
Hello friends, pleaso review my site http://sense4fun.com
Thank you
On 2007-09-19 at 06:18:15, urkeee craps baby wotak monkeypigeon
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spod
SIR BABYHEAD  Posts: 65 Registered: 8/13/2006 Offline
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9/19/2007 at 12:37 |
I am no expert here but I think something is missing.......something resembling content |
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azron123
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9/19/2007 at 14:44 |
That's not fair. There was lots of content. It was just very old and very bland when it was all shiny and new. On the plus side the site was very neat and had very few spelling errors
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acheron
Cynical_Malcontent  SSHOLEPosts: 561 Registered: 4/29/2004 Offline
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9/19/2007 at 15:07 |
Your floating ads certainly stimulate MY sense4fun, but only in a very cynical way
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Clavis_Apocalypticae
Beautiful Puppet of Chaos  SSHOLEPosts: 774 Registered: 5/16/2004 Offline
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9/19/2007 at 15:10 |
Old, recycled content + FARK BUTTON + no LINKSWARM link = fail
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government_death_robot
DARTH MENSES  Posts: 938 Registered: 4/23/2004 Offline
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9/19/2007 at 15:39 |
AIDs
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vasudeva
Bad Taste in your Mouth  SSHOLEPosts: 4525 Registered: 3/8/2002 Offline
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9/19/2007 at 15:55 |
Please add LinkSwarm.com to your list of friends.
Then please never update your site again. This way it will remain fresh and perfect well into the next decade.
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slippedhole> I am on to you and your evil intentions. I am the true protector of this website and am willing to do battle with you. |
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dent
Slipping it into the wrong hole any chance I get  SSHOLEPosts: 877 Registered: 10/20/2004 Offline
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9/19/2007 at 16:28 |
Dude, you site is so full of blinking and moving ads that I felt my eyeballs squishing backwards into their sockets just to get further away from the mess.
I fucking hate you.
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mundhra
dread pirate neckbeard  SSHOLEPosts: 1662 Registered: 3/25/2002 Offline
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9/19/2007 at 17:33 |
it looks like a misstyped url landing page with more ads.
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urkeee
Tender vittles Posts: 2 Registered: 9/19/2007 Offline
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9/20/2007 at 08:37 |
Hey guys, i have linkswarm button on sense4fun.com but i`ll add linkswarm to friends list too. Thanks for comments and write more. I`ll update my site daily
On 2007-09-20 at 03:41:18, urkeee craps baby wotak monkeypigeon |
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Clavis_Apocalypticae
Beautiful Puppet of Chaos SSHOLEPosts: 774 Registered: 5/16/2004 Offline
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9/20/2007 at 12:34 |
urkeee: Hey guys, i have linkswarm button on sense4fun.com but i`ll add linkswarm to friends list too. Thanks for comments and write more. I`ll update my site daily
On 2007-09-20 at 03:41:18, urkeee craps baby wotak monkeypigeon
Dude, kill the slider ads and popup windows. Your object, ostensibly, is to entertain your visitors, not piss them off. Let the stale content do that for you.
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azron123
I can break you with my mind. Watch, I'll do it. SSHOLEPosts: 1505 Registered: 3/6/2003 Offline
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9/20/2007 at 22:57 |
The flashy stuff is cool. It does funny stuff to epileptics.
dent: Dude, you site is so full of blinking and moving ads that I felt my eyeballs squishing backwards into their sockets just to get further away from the mess.
I fucking hate you.
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Acidburn
I am El Chupacabra  SSHOLEPosts: 800 Registered: 8/1/2004 Offline
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9/20/2007 at 23:13 |
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No you can't have my rights. I'm not through with them!
You got Down Syndrome so bad you probably have up,left and right too.
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azron123
I can break you with my mind. Watch, I'll do it. SSHOLEPosts: 1505 Registered: 3/6/2003 Offline
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9/20/2007 at 23:25 |
Damn!
That's not just a thread killer. It cremates it and spreads the ashes.
Cool!
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Clavis_Apocalypticae
Beautiful Puppet of Chaos SSHOLEPosts: 774 Registered: 5/16/2004 Offline
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9/21/2007 at 10:48 |
Dog chancres FTW.
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pangels
Tender vittles  Posts: 4 Registered: 9/30/2007 Offline
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9/30/2007 at 11:22 |
The site is good but looks like you have toooooo way toooo much popups. Those ads will put me off.
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r0b0c0p
Tender vittles  Posts: 38 Registered: 10/5/2007 Offline
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10/18/2007 at 06:52 |
Ok, here's my set of tips:
• Use a different color for the ads so they don't look so much like your own links.
• Put all of the ads at the bottom so they're not taking up most of the window as soon as soon as you enter the site.
• You only need one set of your own categories, not two of them.
• I still don't see a link for LinkSwarm. Get on it.
• Like other people have said, find new ORIGINAL content. Your site is like watching a good porno, then seeing someone come on to the set, kill the pornstars, and rape their corpses.
• Change the description under your title, it's pretty obvious that it isn't the "Funniest Place In The World," especially since your site isn't focused on humor (I looked through the whole damn site, and the only thing even close to a joke is your site layout.)
• Actually fuck it, change the URL as well, maybe www.4minutesofentertainment.com if you're set on the number 4. |
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